After a group discussion it was decided to go with my story idea:
A person is sitting in a cafe and another person comes and sits next to them. The main character rushes off to catch a train. As they are walking through the train station they get the sense that someone is following them. Suddenly the other person from the cafe grabs hold of their bag. The main character then realises that they picked up the wrong bag in the cafe.
After a crit on friday and a discussion with the tutors, it was said that the story idea had a lot of potential but the idea of accidentally picking up someones bag had been done many times because and should be changed, the object should also be something that the audience can connect with more (emotional response).
The final verdict of the group was that we would use a cat box instead of a bag. In doing so the audience could have a stronger connection with the story, as it focuses on the loss of a pet.
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